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Vacancies: 11 girls | 14 boys

Rules for Joining

Hmm...Before you can get at the application you get the lecture... I know, I know. You don't want to hear it, right? No one did at first, but believe me there are somethings about this Union world you have to know. It could mean the difference between acceptance and rejection and also once accepted there's this whole new world to deal with. Understand me, it's a wonderful world, it really is, but you need to know what you're doing...

Rules for applying...

  • First, read theThe House and Union rules
  • Okay, next you have got to check The NYC Newsgirls Union Writers' Resource and make sure of 3 things. Your character has a different first, last, and nickname than anyone else. The site as this really nice feature that will search the names for you so I don't want to hear any excuses. We're all possessive of our names, so at least make an effort.
  • Please keep the time period in mind. It is currently 1905, not 2003. There aren't as many of the conviences that we enjoy today. For example: Only the rich had cars and not very many people in NYC back then were rich.
  • Also, keep location in mind. Astoria is a neighborhood in western Queens.(see the maps)Although there are a few lodging houses nearby, most are not within walking distance, unless you expect to be gone for several days.
  • Relationship to the movie boys: I'm just going to all out say it. If you even so much as mention knowing one of the characters from the movie in your profile, you will not be accepted. There are people who play those characters and you have to check with them before knowing the character and there are also set girlfriends and relatives. Another thing is there is a extra amount of creative freedom when not tied to just the movie. Although, that is where the whole idea developed.
  • We want original characters. For goodness sake, this lodging house doesn't need two Annettes. Develop your own character with your own story. Believe me, you'll feel so much better if you just come up with something completely original, rather than copying off of someone else's model.
  • Detail your characters. A word of advice is to write the profile twice. The first time sketch out the basics and all, but don't send it in. Then, write it again, filling in vague areas. Usually the first try isn't as detail as the second. This always happens to me.
  • Let's keep it clean. We'll accept characters who smoke, drink, and are little harlots, but nothing over R. Think about it this way; if you went to a movie would someone under 17 be able to get in to see your story? If not, walk gingerly. Some subjects make people uncomfortable. I recently dealt with this, so I understand how those uncomfortable people feel. There could be past happens that they don't want to deal with or something. So be careful.
  • Put time into your profile and check for errors. I know that only one of you in this little union world is in Mr. Gunther's A.P. Language and Composition class, so I won't be too strict, but please know where the comma goes.
  • Also, as a general rule, I like asterisks (*) around thoughts and actions as opposed to double colons(::). I don't know why it's just a thing. While we're on asterisks,don't capitalize what you put in the asterisks and don't use the name of your character or he/she. Example:
    Do not write: *Annette picks up Scotchy* or *She picks up Scotchy*
    Do write: *picks up Scotchy*
    Do you understand. Actions are very important, esspecially in profiles and chats, so we'll have a go at another rule: only on sentence per set. ie:
    Do not write: *She grins at little at the new face. She shakes her head slowly*
    Do write: *grins at little at the new face* *shakes her head slowly*
  • Next, and keep in mind this is coming from a girl who studies dialects and does voice-overs, use accents sparingly in your profiles. I think the New York (Brooklyn imparticular) accent is one of the most beautiful dialects -- behind French and British, of course -- and when it's spoken I could listen for hours, but I can't read it for the life of me. So do at least one of your leaders a favor and hold back on the accent.
  • Another thing to keep in mind is: this thing is a writing circle. As of now there are no real story deadlines. It would be nice to have at least a short debut well within a year, though. Also chats are important. Please try to come to them as much as possible. We will hold sparatic sign-in more often while the house is still new and during periods of inactivity.
  • Lastly, as with every other lodging house, this is not first come first serve. The leadly folk reserve the right to reject your profile for any reason, but we promise to e-mail you telling you why. Feel free to rework that character and resend him or her if you wish, but please don't write nasty e-mail to Rachel or I. We've done that and believe me, it doesn't cleanse your soul, nor does it make anyone very happy.

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